Wednesday, 18 July 2012

Desirable: 55 Fiction

The wind blew against her hair, caressing her dusky cheeks. The evening sun made her face glow. He stood there on the street gazing at her beauty, paralyzed with an outburst of sudden emotion.

The next morning , to his disbelief he saw her entering his class. "Good Morning, students, I'm Sandra, your new History lecturer".




Source: Google images






35 comments:

  1. Haha...that was such a great twist to the tale ...loved it :D

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  2. oh! it happens often! :) 100likes

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  3. I ditto Satish. Does happen often. And some respond with 'So what?' :)

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  4. ha ha ...wow..gud for that guys anyways he can now stalk at her all the more :D :P...........
    nice nice writing liked the twist :)

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  5. Lol ... that was a nice one :)

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  6. superb!!!!!
    this is really something cool....
    :-)

    anu

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  7. Ha ha ha!

    After that what? Is he like a Shah Rukh Khan enrolled as a student, as in Farah Khan's movies, so the supposed to be conservative audience can be ok with that romance of a student with teacher? :)

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    1. that movie was just so ridiculous!

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  8. All I can say is well developed ,,,,,, and LOL!!! :D :)

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  9. Ewww...poor poor fellow! LOL..
    Fantastic...Jessy!

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  10. Tragic and funny at the same time. Well done.

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  11. Loved it Jessy :)
    Every student's (painful) story ..lol :)

    Please have a look at my first try at Fiction 55.
    http://maks-journy-nevr-ends.blogspot.in/2012/06/intimacy-in-55-words.html

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    1. LOL...sure will go through yours...

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  12. short and twisty ! very nice !

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  13. Happened to me once, but on the same day:)

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